I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Taflola lava my name is Luisapeta I am learning to post thing on my blog this is my first thing I'v posted on my blog that is my DlO if you didn't post your birthday what will you post insted of your birthday
Kia ora Luisa, thanks for sharing your visual blog profile. I can see that you have remembered we need to keep private information to ourselves and only share personal information that we want the world to know. I love reading in bed too, what is your favourite book at the moment?
Hello Luisapeta! my favourite books are games books!. My older sister loved reading Amilt too!. I think you will be a good reader!. Your blogs are very fantastic.
Kia Ora ,its Shzstela from Kaikohe West School. I enjoyed that you have put all your things about you and your friends like how you like butter chicken and how you also like writing.The facts you have used about all your hobbies and how you have named everyone.Next time you could put more writing in and talk about why and how you did it.
Kia Ora ,my name is Shadae from KWS. Luisa I really enjoyed when you introduce yourself and what you like and who are your friends. This part gave me a memory about when we done this last year but this year we learnt not to put like your whole name witch we done last year.To improve your writing you can look back and put in more descriptive word instead of simple sentences. Check out my blog:://kwsshadaew.blogspot.com/
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Luisa, thanks for sharing your visual blog profile. I can see that you have remembered we need to keep private information to ourselves and only share personal information that we want the world to know. I love reading in bed too, what is your favourite book at the moment?
ReplyDeletehi Cam thank you and my favorite book at the moment is Amilt I love that book what is your favorite book
DeleteHello Luisapeta! my favourite books are games books!. My older sister loved reading Amilt too!. I think you will be a good reader!. Your blogs are very fantastic.
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora ,its Shzstela from Kaikohe West School. I enjoyed that you have put all your things about you and your friends like how you like butter chicken and how you also like writing.The facts you have used about all your hobbies and how you have named everyone.Next time you could put more writing in and talk about why and how you did it.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora ,my name is Shadae from KWS. Luisa I really enjoyed when you introduce yourself and what you like
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This part gave me a memory about when we done this last year but this year
we learnt not to put like your whole name witch we done last year.To improve your writing you can look
back and put in more descriptive word instead of simple sentences. Check out my blog:://kwsshadaew.blogspot.com/
Hi Lusiapeta.Our name is Sione and Tuamelie.We liked the way how you took the picture.And We like butter chicken too.Ka kite!Have a good weekend.
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