I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Luisapeta, this is Cam. Thanks for sharing your learning about the inner planets. I liked it how everyone took turns reading so I could hear all of your voices. I'm really glad that Earth has an atmosphere to protect us from meteoroids, can you imagine how scary it would be if we didn't?!
Hi Cam,Thank you for commenting on my Screencatify. I can imagine how scary it would be if we did't have an atmosphere protecting Earth there would be meteoroids coming from Earth. Bye Cam Luisapeta
Kia ora Luisapeta, Well done on working so well as a group and beginning to get really confident at sharing your learning by making screen casts and talking about what you have learnt and worked on. Ka Pai.
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Kia ora Luisapeta, this is Cam. Thanks for sharing your learning about the inner planets. I liked it how everyone took turns reading so I could hear all of your voices. I'm really glad that Earth has an atmosphere to protect us from meteoroids, can you imagine how scary it would be if we didn't?!
ReplyDeleteHi Cam,Thank you for commenting on my Screencatify. I can imagine how scary it would be if we did't have an atmosphere protecting Earth there would be meteoroids coming from Earth.
DeleteBye Cam
Luisapeta
Kia ora Luisapeta,
ReplyDeleteWell done on working so well as a group and beginning to get really confident at sharing your learning by making screen casts and talking about what you have learnt and worked on.
Ka Pai.