I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Today for SLJ I was working on what I would do when I'm older. This is what I did I hope you like it. My question for you bloggers is what you would do when you are older? thanks
Happy New Year
Luisapeta
I'm Daniel the blog commenter for the Kootuitui schools of the Summer Learning Journey. I hope you've had an awesome break and I'm looking forward to commenting on you blog posts.
Your posts looks really nice and bright and colourful. I like how you've chosen lots of different parts to talk about and that your desire is to help people. That's really sweet and awesome to hear that you would by a house and look after your mum.
Your posts is really cool, I hope you keep posting and enjoy the rest of the SLJ activities.
My name is Tara, one of the blog commenters for this summer's Summer Learning Journey.
I like how you chose to be a doctor. That's such a great job to want because then you get to care for and look after people in need. I think it's really nice of you to want that job.
It's sweet that you want to look after your mum when you grow up. You even have days planned out for it as well! I think your mum is very lucky to have a daughter like you. I also like how you used bright colors, it really makes the post stand out. Maybe next time you could change a few of the colors so the text would be easier to read.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Luisapeta,
ReplyDeleteI'm Daniel the blog commenter for the Kootuitui schools of the Summer Learning Journey. I hope you've had an awesome break and I'm looking forward to commenting on you blog posts.
Your posts looks really nice and bright and colourful. I like how you've chosen lots of different parts to talk about and that your desire is to help people. That's really sweet and awesome to hear that you would by a house and look after your mum.
Your posts is really cool, I hope you keep posting and enjoy the rest of the SLJ activities.
Daniel :)
Kia Ora Luisapeta,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Tara, one of the blog commenters for this summer's Summer Learning Journey.
I like how you chose to be a doctor. That's such a great job to want because then you get to care for and look after people in need. I think it's really nice of you to want that job.
It's sweet that you want to look after your mum when you grow up. You even have days planned out for it as well! I think your mum is very lucky to have a daughter like you. I also like how you used bright colors, it really makes the post stand out. Maybe next time you could change a few of the colors so the text would be easier to read.
Have a great holiday!
Tara