I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wow That's a nice video Luisapeta! When I make one, I would be proud of my great work and yours! If i struggle you can help me! The shark looks funny and the unicorn looks good! You could add more details to it. I can't wait to see you blog something fantastic Kia mau tonu nga mahi pai!
Hello Luisa I like your Dancing video It Makes me dance and How is it cool when your doing it without music THAT'S AMAZING and i like the characters especially the shark and i think you can do better than them and I like The background of it. Have a Great Weekend.
Kia Ora , its Shzstela from Kaikohe West School . I liked the way you had a unicorn and a shark dancing they had some funky moves. This gave me a memory of my little brother and cousin was dancing and imagining there characters off movies or something.Next time you could add some music to there dancing so people can also listen to something nice well watching you little characters dance.
Kia ora,Harmony here from Kaikohe West School.I liked the way you put stars and heaps of decorations in It.You reminded me of when I used to do that stuff at my old school.Next time you can put in some songs and more decorations for the dance and maybe more characters.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Wow That's a nice video Luisapeta!
ReplyDeleteWhen I make one, I would be proud of my great work and yours!
If i struggle you can help me!
The shark looks funny and the unicorn looks good!
You could add more details to it.
I can't wait to see you blog something fantastic
Kia mau tonu nga mahi pai!
Hello Luisa I like your Dancing video It Makes me dance and How is it cool when your doing it without music THAT'S AMAZING and i like the characters especially the shark and i think you can do better than them and I like The background of it. Have a Great Weekend.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora , its Shzstela from Kaikohe West School . I liked the way you had a unicorn and a shark dancing they had some funky moves. This gave me a memory of my little brother and cousin was dancing and imagining there characters off movies or something.Next time you could add some music to there dancing so people can also listen to something nice well watching you little characters dance.
ReplyDeleteKia ora,Harmony here from Kaikohe West School.I liked the way you put stars and heaps of decorations in It.You reminded me of when I used to do that stuff at my old school.Next time you can put in some songs and more decorations for the dance and maybe more characters.
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