I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Luisapeta, Thank you for sharing your work on your blog. I read your poster and learnt so much about the Dawn Service. Just a suggestion to make your font either bigger or put white colour in it for the background. It is a bit hard to read clearly. Thanks Luisapeta. Will you be participating in the Dawn Parade this year by walking on your drive way and standing by your mailbox for a minute to commemorate our soldiers?
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Hi Luisapeta,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your work on your blog. I read your poster and learnt so much about the Dawn Service. Just a suggestion to make your font either bigger or put white colour in it for the background. It is a bit hard to read clearly. Thanks Luisapeta.
Will you be participating in the Dawn Parade this year by walking on your drive way and standing by your mailbox for a minute to commemorate our soldiers?