I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Luisapeta, I really like how you started your final agree or disagree statement on the second last slide- Some people think we should not have a public holiday on Matariki, but my friends and I don't. Great start! You have used paragraphs correctly to group your ideas. Well done. Keep up the awesome mahi.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Luisapeta,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you started your final agree or disagree statement on the second last slide-
Some people think we should not have a public holiday on Matariki, but my friends and I don't. Great start!
You have used paragraphs correctly to group your ideas. Well done. Keep up the awesome mahi.