I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Luisapeta and Tina , when I saw this I was trying to inference what was going and I saw that she said that where is my jewelry? and then I saw that there was a person with jewelry and that means she took the jewelry and god job Tina and Luisapeta.
Hi This is Tevita, I like this blog because it looked like it took you a long time to do this. My question is who is the person who stole the jewelry?? B-)
Hi Luisapeta and Tina this is Neha from your class. I like your picture that you made. I think that the girl was a spoiled kid and the other girl stole are jewelry. Keep up the good work.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Luisapeta and Tina , when I saw this I was trying to inference what was going and I saw that she said that where is my jewelry? and then I saw that there was a person with jewelry and that means she took the jewelry and god job Tina and Luisapeta.
ReplyDeleteHi This is Tevita, I like this blog because it looked like it took you a long time to do this. My question is who is the person who stole the jewelry?? B-)
ReplyDeleteHi Luisapeta and Tina this is Neha from your class. I like your picture that you made. I think that the girl was a spoiled kid and the other girl stole are jewelry. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteHi Neha,
DeleteThank you The real answer is the girl was looking for her jewelry and the other girl stole her jewelry
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Hi Luisapeta this is Tina I really like your Inference it really cool and keep up the good work bye?
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