I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora bloggers in my class we have been learning about mood and atmosphere and today I wrote a story about a boy named Jon and how he lost his tee-shirt hope you like it.
Kia ora Luisapeta,I liked how you used verbs and adjectives in your writing,and also I loved your characters you used in your story,keep up the great work!
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Luisapeta,I liked how you used verbs and adjectives in your writing,and also I loved your characters you used in your story,keep up the great work!
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