I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Luisapeta, I hope your experience at the zoo was great,I liked how you said "I really like eels because they swim and I like swimming" Great job!
Kia ora Luisapeta, I enjoy reading your zoo recount its really interesting but some of the sentence doesn't make sense. Next time you proof read it. NICE JOB! By: Soloia
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Luisapeta,
ReplyDeleteI hope your experience at the zoo was great,I liked how you said "I really like eels because they swim and I like swimming" Great job!
Kia ora Luisapeta,
ReplyDeleteI enjoy reading your zoo recount its really interesting but some of the sentence doesn't make sense. Next time you proof read it. NICE JOB!
By: Soloia