I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Luisapeta, I really like your work of wonders of the world, it looks wonderful and amazing. Have a great rest and enjoy your holiday's and Christmas.
I’m Daniel from the SLJ Blog commenting team. I’m looking forward to seeing all your amazing blog posts and I hope you’re enjoying your summer.
Well done Girls! Your presentation on the Five Wonders of the Ancient World is very impressive. Your slides are clear and easy to read and the pictures are a great addition.
Your video was really well made and I like how you started with greeting the audience and introduced ourselves first before sharing the research you’ve done. It would be great if you could include links to where you got the information so that people could learn more if they’re interested.
The ancient monuments are quite interesting to learn about, I hope you enjoyed studying what people built in the past, sadly most of these are gone today except the pyramids which I’d love to see one day.
Great stuff, This is an outstanding blog post which will get bonus points!
Hi Daniel, Thank you for commenting on my blog and doing the slides is actually really fun I enjoyed doing it because it is easy as pie. Bye From Luisapeta
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Luisapeta,
ReplyDeleteI really like your work of wonders of the world, it looks wonderful and amazing.
Have a great rest and enjoy your holiday's and Christmas.
Hey Ana, Luisapeta and Tiannah
ReplyDeleteI’m Daniel from the SLJ Blog commenting team. I’m looking forward to seeing all your amazing blog posts and I hope you’re enjoying your summer.
Well done Girls! Your presentation on the Five Wonders of the Ancient World is very impressive. Your slides are clear and easy to read and the pictures are a great addition.
Your video was really well made and I like how you started with greeting the audience and introduced ourselves first before sharing the research you’ve done. It would be great if you could include links to where you got the information so that people could learn more if they’re interested.
The ancient monuments are quite interesting to learn about, I hope you enjoyed studying what people built in the past, sadly most of these are gone today except the pyramids which I’d love to see one day.
Great stuff, This is an outstanding blog post which will get bonus points!
See you later in the comments.
Daniel
Hi Daniel,
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting on my blog and doing the slides is actually really fun I enjoyed doing it because it is easy as pie.
Bye From Luisapeta