I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Luisapeta, Thank you for posting your Reading task on your blog. It is fantastic to see that you have used three different question starters- Why, How and What. In your second question you forgot to write the answer Luisa. Why did the school cancel? Schools were cancelled because... I really found the last question interesting- what got quieter and quieter? It makes you really wonder. Well done on sharing your learning regularly on your blog. You are a super blogger.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Luisapeta,
ReplyDeleteThank you for posting your Reading task on your blog. It is fantastic to see that you have used three different question starters- Why, How and What. In your second question you forgot to write the answer Luisa. Why did the school cancel?
Schools were cancelled because...
I really found the last question interesting- what got quieter and quieter? It makes you really wonder.
Well done on sharing your learning regularly on your blog. You are a super blogger.
Hi Manpreet,
ReplyDeleteThank you for the comment and seeing that mistake I will fix it right away
Luisapeta