I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Luisapeta, This is just such a warm hearted card. Brought tears to my eyes. Wow, what a beautifully written card. Your mum will cherish this card forever. Enjoy your time with your mum on Mother's Day.
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Kia ora Luisapeta this is Neha. I really like your mother's day card and I think your mum like love it. Keep working hard and happy mother's day.
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ReplyDeleteThis is just such a warm hearted card. Brought tears to my eyes. Wow, what a beautifully written card. Your mum will cherish this card forever. Enjoy your time with your mum on Mother's Day.
Hi Neha, thank you for this and happy Mothers day to you too.
ReplyDeleteHi manpreet thank you for this comment I really hope you have a lovely mothers day with your son's Happy mothers day Luisapeta
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