I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Luisapeta, Well done on writing your opinion and giving reasons. Excellent start at using paragraphs. Just remember you don't need to number your paragraphs. It is fantastic to see you using great sentence starters like the main reason, Another point is...and finally. Well done.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Luisapeta i love yur argumentation on people should stopp complaining abot covid-19 yur a smark girl bye Tina.
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ReplyDeleteHi Luisapeta,
ReplyDeleteWell done on writing your opinion and giving reasons. Excellent start at using paragraphs. Just remember you don't need to number your paragraphs. It is fantastic to see you using great sentence starters like the main reason, Another point is...and finally. Well done.