I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Luisapeta, thank you for sharing your maths and writing work. I love how you used present tense in your writing as well as descriptive language including similes and onomatopoeia. Well done!
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Kia ora Luisapeta, thank you for sharing your maths and writing work. I love how you used present tense in your writing as well as descriptive language including similes and onomatopoeia. Well done!
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Luisapeta this is so nice and amazing maths and writing.
ReplyDeleteGood Job.