Should sports be easier for the kids with medical problems?
Should sports be easier for the kids with medical problems? My opinion is yes because 1. They have medical problems 2. The sports that everyone else is playing might be too hard for them and 3. It would be a better chance for everyone to win.
Reason 1: They have medical problems.
You don’t know what type of medical problem/s he or she could have. It could be Heart problem, Asthma, cancer, diabetes or even lung disease. But whatever it is that is slowing them down from winning whatever sport you are playing.
Reason 2. The sports that everyone else is playing might be too hard for them.
whatever sport you are playing like Basketball, baseball, touch rugby, soccer might be too hard for the kids with medical problems. Maybe the teacher can make the rules easier for the kids with the medical problems. But whatever it is that is slowing them down from winning whatever sport you are playing.
Reason 3. It would be a better chance for everyone to win.
Like I said in reason 2 whatever sport you are playing like Basketball, baseball, touch rugby, soccer might be too hard for the kids with medical problems. But maybe when the teachers twist the rules a little bit it would be much easier for the kids with medical problems to win as well as the other kids.
Should sports be easier for the kids with medical problems? What do you think? If you could change anything in my writing what would it be?
Kia ora Luisapeta, thank you for sharing your persuasive writing. You have definitely convinced me! I like how you structured your writing and elaborated with examples. What would be some suggestions you have for how sports can be made easier?
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