I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Luisapeta, fantastic work on your report! You have structured it really well with your 3 body paragraphs, introduction and conclusion. I like how you have used a hook start about the Rock, and in your first body paragraph you used a rhetorical question. Ka mau te wehi, awesome work.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Luisapeta,
ReplyDeleteI really like your work that you been doing this week and I hope you have a lovely day in the week ends.
Kia ora Luisapeta, fantastic work on your report! You have structured it really well with your 3 body paragraphs, introduction and conclusion. I like how you have used a hook start about the Rock, and in your first body paragraph you used a rhetorical question. Ka mau te wehi, awesome work.
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