I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Luisapeta, Great work at sharing your reading you did today. Well done. Your summary is to the point and written clearly. Always remember to proofread your work. Check your spelling and punctuation please. Keep up the great sharing and learning Luisapeta.
Hello Luisapeta. I loved hearing that you are reading. Your book reminded me about a movie I have watched where twins did the same thing of trading places with each other. Maybe you have seen the movie as well. Keep up the great work Luisapeta. Reading a page a day will keep the cobwebs in your brain away :). Can't wait to see you again really soon. Bronca
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Hi Luisapeta,
ReplyDeleteGreat work at sharing your reading you did today. Well done. Your summary is to the point and written clearly.
Always remember to proofread your work. Check your spelling and punctuation please. Keep up the great sharing and learning Luisapeta.
Kia ora Luisapeta,
ReplyDeleteGreat job summary your book Twin Spin but there are some mistakes you had miss.
GOOD JOB!
By:Soloia
Hello Luisapeta. I loved hearing that you are reading. Your book reminded me about a movie I have watched where twins did the same thing of trading places with each other. Maybe you have seen the movie as well. Keep up the great work Luisapeta. Reading a page a day will keep the cobwebs in your brain away :). Can't wait to see you again really soon.
ReplyDeleteBronca
Hi Bronca,
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog I miss you so much I sure will read a page everyday.
:) Luisapeta