I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Luisapeta, What amazing ideas you have brainstormed together with Tina and Soloia. Well done. I do agree with you that heroes are people who help other people out and I think they change the world and make it better. Keep up the fantastic learning.
Hi Luisapeta, you and your friends have made a nice brainstorm about heroes. I think you are a hero too because you always help me and look after me. Love from Tafa
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Hi Luisapeta,
ReplyDeleteWhat amazing ideas you have brainstormed together with Tina and Soloia. Well done. I do agree with you that heroes are people who help other people out and I think they change the world and make it better. Keep up the fantastic learning.
Hi Luisapeta, you and your friends have made a nice brainstorm about heroes. I think you are a hero too because you always help me and look after me. Love from Tafa
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