I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Luisapeta, Thank you for sharing your summary. Please proofread Luisa before you post as where you hav written for it should be from. Also he had meningitis , he is not suffering from it currently. It is from meningitis he lost his hands and legs. In my opinion he is hero as despite loosing his legs and hands he did not stop from acheiving his goal. He is an inspirtation for people. Keep up the awesome sharing.
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Kia ora Luisapeta,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your summary. Please proofread Luisa before you post as where you hav written for it should be from. Also he had meningitis , he is not suffering from it currently. It is from meningitis he lost his hands and legs.
In my opinion he is hero as despite loosing his legs and hands he did not stop from acheiving his goal. He is an inspirtation for people.
Keep up the awesome sharing.